310 (??I think???)

ITS 11:42 ILL POST THIS AND THEN UPDATE IT W THE CORRECT FORMATTING :)

PROS:
the hosts looked crisper than usual, if a bit blue!
trick shots was cool
The play review stressed me out but it turned out ok.

CONS:
we don't need 2 "you're watchings" in a row
the title for lost and found was too long, sorry guys I said it wasn't, it is!!
what happen to Ayana's CSU spot?? It was cut off

WHAT I DID: She Kills Monsters Spot

309

pros: the boy's basketball ad is actually so cute.
The tutor made good use of music and funny sound effects!
MobileID was.... short!?

cons: I really think we need music in the background of things.... to help move the story and help tell the audience the mood of things.
That said, my audio is so messed up on the play ad!!! AAHHHH!!!!!!!


me: I made the SKM ad!!

11/18 308

PROS

Novembeard was CUTE AS HECK 

I love Damien drake and not just because my friends

SHOUTOUT TO SPORTS, interesting fast and informative!!!

MY DIVISION LAUGHED AT THE CLASSROOM in a good way :)

people liked my company spot :D

CONS

Novembeard lagged I think... could've been shorter or faster

classroom lagged!! we should have music in it. 

First world problems was very yikes........ why did they take a video someone else already made and make it....... worse

This week I filmed the classroom and  created the Young Company. 

November 4

Pros:
This week's sports was the best I've seen since Zach Hayes graduated!

Cons:
transitions!! were!! not great!!! (transition to Hallway Patrol, cut the end of the Novembeard segment, etc)

I helped make the Wednesday Update

10/28

pros: 

pumpkin head was funny

Aug was funny, Stephani was great

hallway patrol was hysterical 

August and mackenzie are an amazing host team!!!

cons:

pumpkin head was too long

Aug was too quiet and no subtitles?

hallway patrol subtitles on the intro

host subtitles?

why... are the sports so small

novembeard is my fave but dragged a little bit 

I can't decide how I feel about the audio stabilizing on the classroom. 

I filmed The Classroom.

EDIT: the mom review

hallway patrol made my mom laugh, and she still has a crush on Khary. Khary did you know my mom has a crush on you? she totally does. she also wanted to know why everything was about death and dying.

10/21 episode

pros:
I like the behind the scenes intro.
I love the shot of Patryk on the ripstick.
Sports was a lot better this episode!
Ok! Classroom!! Short and sweet!! Perfect.

cons:
Is my download speed slow or is this weirdly pixilated? I'ts probably just me though.
The bathrom noe would be better with only one song, and slightly shorter.
Sports needs faster cuts.
Yikes! 24 minutes is waaayyy too long!! We can't keep anyone's attention for 24 minutes!
The tutor...
Title text here!! Yikes.

I filmed The Classroom.

10/7 show

pros: ALL the audio was great!!

Mackenzie and Amanda were great

sports is funny and informative 

THE FILM CLUB IS THE BEST THING IVE  EVER SEEN??? Who made it??

cons: cops dragged a bit (just a couple shots w awkward pacing)

cops subtitles were a little small

sports still needs to find the balance between being too long and providing all the necessary and interesting information

why is the sports host bit so small?

my lame yellow shot bits!!!!

the banana bit could be better

I filmed The Classroom.

episode 1: this is late!!!

better late than never, perhaps?

pros:
no glitches this week!!!
audio is better!!!
sports is good, visually

cons:
the tutor was kind of funny but too long
"""today"""" (it was post poned but still made Wednesday announcements)
My polling data says the animations are not creative and bad
The announcers could be more enthusiastic for sports, and go faster.

I filmed The Classroom.

first episode critique

WHAT COULD BE BETTER:

1. Audio balance!! Some things were too quiet!
2. Jess mentioned "fall events" but didn't provide any dates.
3. Glitches?

WHAT'S GOOD:

1. The bloopers on the credits was cute!

notes from meeting with August and Ryan and Mackenzie and Alyssa and Dayana

In lieu of any original ideas, here's what we talked about in class yesterday.

1. Instead of trying to do anything at all like Hallways of Our Lives, which was completely perfect in every way and is something we shouldn't even try to compete with, we should go in a completely different direction. Ryan suggested a sitcom, and insinuated he and Alex have a lot of ideas for this, but didn't specify. Aug thought we should do an Office-esque look at teachers, but I think it would be better to do an in classroom mockumentary, a set number of kids in the classroom and just one teacher. This is what I would really like to be a part of, if Ryan will let me, because I'm getting the impression that this is His Brainchild.
2. My brother should have a politics segment! We need a politics segment because most of the class of 2016 will be able to vote in the next national election, and we could contribute to their knowledge of current events. Also my brother is hilarious, you're looking at the next John Stewart practically (don't tell him I said that.) I don't know how these things usually work, but in my mind, August and I and a couple others sit down and throw some jokes together and talk about current events, and also, not just nationally. But we should talk about city politics! The potential upcoming teacher's strike, etc.
3. We talk a lot about school events, but we should be promoting more city events.
4. Also things I wrote down and didn't elaborate on so I'm not totally sure what the whole Idea was:
• Jimmy Kimmel lie-witnesses
• celebrity impressions (panel) (check August's blog, he elaborates more)
• investigative reporting
• senioritis/back to school
• get sports better